Friday, 21 June 2013

20.06.13 Homework


We have just finished our unit  play scripts . For homework this week I would like you to write the first scene of a play script.

 Choose 2 characters and imagine that your 2 characters have just found a magic jewel. Write some dialogue between the 2 characters. 
  Remember to include, stage direction, character name:, brackets and punctuation.

Only write the first scene of your play script, as we would like other children to comment and write your second scene.

We are looking forward to reading your scripts.

17 comments:

  1. The magical Jewel
    Cast: Tom and Katie (Brother and Sister)
    Setting: In a different dimension.
    Scene 1
    (Tom and Katie are chatting about what just happened and why are they in a different dimension.)
    Katie: (Panicking) What just happened? Why are we here?
    Tom: Calm down Katie we will try and find a way out of here.
    (Tom and Katie are running and trying to find a way out of the dimension. Tom falls down a whole and rushing behind is Katie.)
    Katie: Tom what’s that shiny object?
    Tom: Is…is that a ring?

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    1. good amrit

      I liked it sooo much

      by sophieya

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  2. The magic jewel

    Cast:Tori and Katy

    Setting:In a cave where the magic jewel is. Tori and Katy standing in front of it.

    Tori: Wow look it is very sparkly (smiled Tori)

    Katy:I think it is 100 years old or maybe even 1000 years old (says Katy trying to touch the jewel)

    Tori:NO don't touch the jewel you might break it.

    Katy:Ok I will not touch the jewel. But if the jewel is called the magic jewel then maybe it is a jewel that can make our wish's come true.

    Tori:Yeah let's try it

    Tori and Katy:We would like to be princess's

    (the magic jewel made there wish come true).

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  3. FAYE HARPER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!22 June 2013 at 15:25

    The Jewel Seed
    Cast: Louise and Jenna
    Scene1:
    Louise: Look, look (out of breath )
    Jenna: What is all the Fuss? (scared voice)
    Louise: I just saw a jewel seed right outside my house (shouting)
    Jenna: WHAT IS A JEWEL SEED!!!!!!
    Louise: Never mind about that, come and see
    10 minutes later
    Jenna: Err Louise I think we are lost
    Louise: Ok I don’t think so (when archer they was)
    Jenna: I’m scared let go home
    Louise: We can’t because we are in the middle of nowhere
    ........................................

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    1. scene 2:Raining outside

      (Louise and Jenna walking in the nowhere)

      Jenna:How much more to walk I am very hungry (singed Jenna)

      Louise:I don't now (panicking)

      Jenna:Are we even going the right way

      Louise:Look Jenna there's a cave maybe it has some food inside

      Jenna:Well if it has food inside than I am going in

      Louise:It wouldn't just give us food it will give us shelter too

      (Louise and Jenna quickly walked to the cave it was very dark in there)

      Jenna:Louise where are you?

      Louise:I am over here Jenna

      Jenna:Louise you said there will be food in here(Jenna started shouting at Louise)

      Louise:No I said MAYBE there will be food in here (angry and shouting)

      Jenna:NO!!!!!!!

      (Jenna and Louise started fighting Louise touched one of the walls and....)

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  4. The Magic gem
    Cast :Beck,,jack
    Scene 1:cave
    Beck:lets find something cool
    Jack:like what ?
    Beck:something magical
    Jack: ok lets find it
    Beck: Jack! look i found a magic gem (happily)
    Jack:great!
    Beck:it looks really expensive
    Jack: yeah it must be at least 60 million pounds
    Beck: and its really green
    Jack:yes it is but did you see that inside that gem its yellow
    Beck:yeah
    by
    hassan

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  5. cast:Green lantern superman
    scene1:on green planet
    green lantern:(lifting a weight)we have done a good job.
    (huge explosion)
    superman:(dark and moody. magic dimond in hand)
    take it.
    Green lantern:wow whats thats amazing what is it.
    superman:its a dimond from pirsak
    greenlantern:its so cool.
    superman:I need it to make a portal toget me to basume
    and I need the dimond pmisak

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  6. James and Tim

    James:” Look. What is that shinning?” (Pointing at a pile of rubbish.)

    Tim:(Kicking at the rubbish with his feet.) “It is nothing but rubbish.”

    James:(Stepping in front of Tim to stop him kicking.) Loudly. “No that.” (Pointing again at the ground.)

    James and Tim :(Stood still staring at the jewel.)

    James and Tim: Together “It’s a diamond.”

    James and Tim:(Bend down to get a closer look. Carefully, move the rubbish out the way.)

    Tim:(Still looking at the diamond.) Whispers. “What are we going to do.”

    James:(Still bent down. Looks around to make certain no one is watching.) “Lets keep it.”

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  7. scene 1: shopping centre
    cast:Emily & Lucy

    Emily:oh lets go in that shop(Excited)

    lucy:look!This T-shirt looks pretty(shouted)

    Emily:Lucy come here there's a jewel(confused)

    lucy:it looks magical(confused)

    Emily:As if (bossy)

    lucy:Well lets have a try...I want £10(bossy)(£10 came out of Jewel)

    Emily:Ok! now that is magic.
    ( walks away with jewel)
    By Sophieya





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  8. The research of the Jewel
    Cast:two cowboy,Teodor and Dan.
    Action:in the preerie,Texas.
    Scene1:find a black cave and walk down in.
    Teodor said:i see the light of the Jewel..
    Dan{very scare,let the horse out}:yes,i see it.....
    Teodor{bind the horse}:will go down to find the Jewel,came
    with me???
    Dan{touch the horse,calm him}:i will following you in a
    minute..
    Teodor go inside,very dark,but in one moment he see the small light disepear,appear,,,
    after a minute,Dan it`s camming,both breath of air very hrdly,they are scare..in final approach and they see the Jewel,very lighting and beautiful!
    Teodor{very exited}:we are rich...!!!
    Dan{still scare}:yes,thank God,we are rich,our dreams they
    be realy......

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  9. Fariha Chowdhury23 June 2013 at 17:56

    The magic jewel

    Cast: Jill, Bill.

    Scene 1: In the house.

    (Jill plays with her dolls but suddenly she found a magic jewel).

    Jill: Hey Bill, look what I found, its a jewel.(Surprised).

    Bill: It looks magical!(Excitedly).

    Jill: Yeah, it looks colourful as well.

    (Bill looks at the jewel).

    Bill: Lets keep this magic jewel somewhere safe.

    Jill: But don't you want to see what it can do?

    (Bill starts thinking).

    Bill: Well, its just a jewel.(Calm)

    Jill: But its magical.

    (Bill looks at Jill and smiles at her).

    Bill: Maybe if we put it somewhere dark, it will glow!

    Jill: It might do that.

    Bill: Lets put it somewhere dark and at night we will check if its glowing!(In a excited voice).

    Jill: That is a great idea!(Jumping).

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  10. the stone :[]
    scene 1: park

    cast: Avi,Parth

    Avi: look at that golden stone

    Parth: that looks awesome (eyes shining)

    Avi: look! there's another one, you take that one,I take this one.
    Parth: ook,though I think it is a jewel



    (walk home)

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  11. lilly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!24 June 2013 at 14:59

    Lilly's homework
    cast: Libby Lilly
    scene: in a castle
    Lilly: do you wont to play princess Libby
    Libby : yes let me go and get my outfit
    Lilly: me to !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Libby: WOW you look nice
    Lilly: I like your dress where did you get it from .
    Libby : t.k max let have a pignut
    Lilly: ok
    Libby : bye bye see you tomorrow

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  12. libby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!24 June 2013 at 15:14

    Libby's homework.
    cast: Lilly Libby

    scene: outside in a playground
    Libby: do you wont to play it Lilly.
    Lilly: yes but not lunch time.
    libby:2 minute let me go a toilet.
    Lilly : ok hurry up don't be late .
    Libby: ok.
    Lilly: your it ha-ha.
    Libby: ha-ha your it .
    Lilly: break times.
    Libby: do you wont to play it tomorrow.
    Lilly: ok cool it was fun.

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  13. The magical jewel

    Scene: New York
    Cast: Robo and James

    Robo:It's a magic jewel.

    James:I wish for bannanas because I am hungry.

    Robo:Amazing! There is your banana treat. I wish I were with my freinds who are on a mission to the moon. I miss them.

    James:Robo! you just made a wish

    Robo:What!!!!!!!!

    James:I don't want to go to the moon

    Robo:woohoo we are flying to the moon.

    by Joshua

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  14. Scene: World war 1 in house.
    Cast: John and Lewise

    (World war 1 sirigns)

    John:(tierdly)who turned my alarm on.

    Lewise: and mine why is it even on.

    (sirings going louder)

    John: world war 1 sirins run to the under ground(shouting)

    (both run to under ground)

    Lewise: I have been hit

    John:NOOOOOOOO(crying)

    (John runs to station)

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  15. lilly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!5 July 2013 at 17:58

    lilly homework
    scen: outside the shopping center
    cast: Lilly Libby Amrit
    Lilly;HEY Amrit what you doing (excited )
    Amrit: nothing but wont to go to roomfoud (shoting)
    Lilly: of cause (walking up stars)
    Libby : het what you doing here
    Libby:oh no there to bye this red goul butterfullg bag (dreamfly)
    lilly : come on amrit we shoudlet being hanging aroud with here
    amrit : i no right apshly with that look
    lilly : oh let go in that shop dream fashion
    libby : that my bag no ones taking that apart from me
    amrit let go of that it mine and lilly
    lilly: let go drop it libby (shouting)
    Amrit:good thinking it mine now
    lilly: war on girl
    amrit:ho ya

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