English Homework
Thursday 28th November 2013 to be done by Tuesday 3rd
December 2013
Can you up level these sentences?
Write them
below. Can you use any adjectives? Similes? Sentence Openers? Connectives?
Punctuation?
1) It is cold
outside.
2) The dog barked.
3) He was
scary.
4) He looked
at her.
5) They walked
down the street.
1) One Myst morning, there was frost all over the green grass, it was as cold as soft, sprinkling snow.
ReplyDelete2) Hectically the doggy dog barked.
3) The ghostly ghost frightened me as I was edging closer and closer to the hunted house.....
4) As I was strolling around the peaceful palace, suddenly Maxi looked at her, the weird one, she came marching towards Maxi...
By Amrit
1.) Outside, it was freezing so i wore a warm coat.
ReplyDelete2.) My next door neighbors dog was barking really loud.
3.) The man scarily stared into my eyes.
4.) As the boy ran across the football pitch, he saw the girl talking to someone.
5.) My dad scurried down the muddy street with me.
It is terribly freazing,icy and cold outside.
ReplyDeleteThe ferocious,spotty dog barked loudly.
The man with the wierd hair and dress looked really petrifying.
The handsome looking man gazed at the beautiful girl.
They ran down the colourful,narrow street.
by Joshua
1.Out side is very ,freezing and ice.
ReplyDeleteThe time cold is coming.
When cold coming?everybody are ready for Frozen night.!!!
2.My dog he braked at me.
I heard one dog,barked in the garden!.
3.My mum she scared me after my sister eat one small choclate.
When i saw a fox in front of my door i got scared.
4.He looked so quickly at her that you couldn't see nothing.
"He look at me so scary."
5.I run very quickly to find my sister down the street.
1. It was freezing cold because it was snowing outside.
ReplyDelete2.The spotty dog barked ferociously to the man.
3. He looked very petrifying.
4. The handsome looking man looked at the beatiful woman.
5. They walked down the slipery and narrow street.
by Joshua Elamparithi
1) As I woke up on a winter morning I could see Myst all over the ground.
ReplyDelete2) My brown and fast dog loudly barked at the stranger.
3) The blue eyed man was looking very terrified.
4) The way the ugly man stared at the pretty woman scared her a little.
5) While I was not looking my dog ran down the muddy footpath.
By Elina
One frostey morning it was dredfly cold out side
ReplyDeleteThe black howling dog vishely bark at the inesent woman
The terraible moster scared me with all his fright
They funny man looked at her nicely
They walked down the bright narrow street
it was freving cold like snow
ReplyDeletethe black spoted dog barked at the little girl
the scary monster scard mthe ugly man looked at thr pretty girl
they walked down the brighted colorfull sreet
1. As it was cold outside I wore a hat, so that I didn't feel like a snowman!
ReplyDelete2.The terrifying loud dog barked so loud that I felt my ears ripping off.
3.The tall, scary man, with a black mask, stood watching me, in the middle of the night.
4.The teracher watched the small girl walk into lesson, late.
5.I ran as fast as a cheetar to find my naughty sister.
1] It was freezing cold outside as I looked out of the window I saw snow starting to fall.
ReplyDelete2] My lovely, chocolate brown Labrador, Rexy barked excitedly as I let his lead go by the lake.
3] The Head teacher was so scary I started shaking in my boots.
4] The strict, annoying teacher watched the massive snake sliver into her classroom.
5] As the family walked quickly down the street they noticed an elephant charging towards them.
by Billy
1) In the miserable outside playground it was freezing cold and was pouring with rain.
ReplyDelete2) The detective dog barked extremely loud so everyone could hear him.
3) He was as scary as a huge snake and as strong as a big elephant.
4) He looked at her doubtful face in despair.
5) After that, they walked down the unexpected steep hill.
By Vicky Zlatkovsky
1) Dear diary,
ReplyDeleteIt is sprinkling with white glossy snow this winter and the water are shaped like blue crystals or diamonds, I hope you come soon dont miss the fun.
2) The blue and ginger dog was the prime suspect, and wait... Pure evidence that my hair is blue and that the dog barked!!
3) Everyone was over at my place having a party which I was fine with but what I couldnt understand why Mum and Dad invited this guy, I mean he had warts spikey hair, I just didnt understand!!!
4) Then after all I said about the warts and stuff he looked at a girl in a wierd way that was way out of his league and she smiled back in a wierd way, it had to be like another world war, I mean him!
5) And then, and then he even walked her down the most dirty street picking his nose which she didnt notice, They must have stayed up all night.
1) One winter morning,as the snow fell from heven,me and my family were watching the weather forcast,it said it was going to be freezing cold towards the north.
ReplyDelete2) The police dogs barked their loudest as the burgler as raced across the room.
3) The ghost fritened me as he led me to a dead end...
4) "Hi" sqeaked the clown as hiseyes looked stright at the little girl.
5) The bullies ganged up and stomped down the busy street.
By Shreya
1) It is very cold outside the street .
ReplyDelete2) The dog barked very loud as he saw a little mouse.
3) He was very scary because it was dark.
4) Looked funny at her.
5) They walked slowly down the main street.
I looked through the frosty window, I could only see the terrifying lightning.
ReplyDeleteI quickly walked down the empty street as a black coated dog franticly started barking at me.
The tall man slowly walked towards me with an angry face.
The angry women stared into the little boy's eyes.
We ran for our lives as an angry bull charged at us.
1.It was cold outside my eyes were red my lips were dry the cold blood in my body stopped pumping.
ReplyDelete2.Without a warning the dog barked. I heard a m myistirious howl across the whole neighbourhood
3.He scared me with his big glowing eyes and he the grabbed me.
4.He looked at her as if he didn’t know her.
5. They walked down the street fed up and sad.
By Mikael
1. One wintery Christmas it was freezing outside as it was heavily snowing
ReplyDelete2. The fierce dog barked ferociously.
3. The man looked horrifyingly and terrifyingly scary.
4. He suspiciously looked at the pretty girl.
5. They chased after their sphere shaped football down the road.
It is cold outside because the Christmas coming.
ReplyDeleteThe black, scary dog barked loud as he can.
He was very scared because the black dog barked very loud.
He looked at her because she was crying.
They walked slowly down the black street.
By Kusenthini.
1) It is freezing outside in the playground, it is Arctic out there.
ReplyDelete2) The dog barked crazily, waking everyone up.
3) He was so scary that my hair stood up; I knew there was more horror awaiting.
4) He stared at her terrified face, trying to understand her babble.
5) They slowly crept down the street looking for danger.
1) On a winters day I saw frost everywhere.
ReplyDelete2) My naughty and mischievous dog barked at the little kitten.
3)The fierce dragon in the story was scary that all children got frightened.
4)The man persuaded the girl to buy chocolates and the way he looked at her made her frightened.
5)As the family were walking they saw posters of helping children in India.