Write a paragraph describing this picture. Think about everything we have learnt about using adjectives and connectives. Remember all the different sentence openers you could include to make your writing more interesting.
Why is the elephant on water ski's? Where is he going? Is he in a competition? What other animals could water ski?
The elephant is on water ski's because he is trying to hectically get past the boat. He is going to the surface of the ocean before the sea freezes into ice. The elephant is also on a race to raise money for charity. None other animals could water ski because the ski's are too big and also this is the only animal that has the ability to water ski.
ReplyDeleteThe Elephant is magical it is very heavy but travels on a ski.The elephant is going on a trip to Sri lanka because he is going to raise money for poor people all around the world. The elephant is going to water ski 20 miles to raise money for poor people.
ReplyDeleteWould you sponsor this generous elephant? Would you support him?
In this picture, there is a big , grey elephant with water ski's beneath its feet. I think the elephant is upset. I think this because the elephant has chains tied to his feet. Also it is hanging its head low, humans also do this when they are sad. I think it is from a circus, because usually wild animals, that perform, have chains tied to there feet. How would you feel having chains tied to your feet all day? My final idea for thinking this is a sad picture is that most happy picture are all colourful and bright, whereas most sad pictures are black and white
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The grey elephant is on a bridge but all the other bit of the bridge is sinking into the water . The person who in the boat also tide the elephant on to the bridge and peddling fast to run away before someone comes the elephant is sinking slowly in to the dirty muddy sinking water when the storms comes the elephant is going to sink.
ReplyDeleteThe reason why the big, fat elephant is on water ski's is because he is having a race with an other animal and the elephant has a long way to go . He lives in India where he has lots of elephant friends to have fun with.Also no other animal in this world can water ski because elephants are the most smart animal's on earth.
ReplyDeleteThe elephant is in a very dangerous race with some other daring elephants. A shark with teeth as sharp as knives, kills everyone who comes on top of the ice.The elephant has to race all the way to the other island. Whoever makes it past the death shark and reaches the other island first wins.
ReplyDeleteAs the big ,silly elephant saw that it was a very sunny day ,he decided to go outside and play. Suddenly, the big elephant saw a huge group of animals with ski's,so he thought of getting his ski's and have a good time riding on them ,but he knew that he doesn't now how to ride on the sea with his ski's!After he got to the shore ,he saw a motor boat which was just about to go to the sea. The big elephant quickly ran to the motor boat and saw a rope. He pulled it, tied it to his ski's and of he sailed, sailing far away from home!!!
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The giant Elephant,is getting ready to ski on a lake.The elephant is trying to show the others animals that he is the best one.He want to win a lot of money so that he can help the animals that have cancer.Also he is putting his self in danger,
ReplyDeletemaybe he would fall in the water,the water maybe is cold or in it maybe there are scary sharks.
Elephants are the only big animals that can stay on water.
Humphrey the elegant elephant was both excited and disappointed to be leaving his homeland. The hunters had cut off Humphreys tusks, and the RSPCA had come to take him on an unexpected journey to India. However Humphrey was so gigantic that the small boat couldn’t take his weight. Humphrey suggested they use his elephant water skis, these strong, solid skis could carry Humphrey to safety. He was the jungle champion water skier, better than rough rhinos. He then glided across the glistening blue ocean to the warm shores of India.
ReplyDeleteGigantic Elephants.This mindblowing creature is on water skis. Its aim.... get out the frosty north pole.Infact this elephant is so keen to escape it knocked over the Titanic(which is humongous) miles back and now in search for some water to drink.
ReplyDeleteNow Mr. Elephant has got himself on top of a cliff with gigantic hole underneath him. But luckily for him he was on the skis so, he could make a sort of ladder.Next thing you know he had fallen from the cliff and in water.He was so angry that he got his big trunk of his and started squirting it in the air.
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A few day ago, there was a tornado in a zoo in Russia. So they had to move all the animals to safety. They had to get through a frozen river. But if the elephant walked, the frozen ice would break and it would have drowned.Someone thought of a clever idea of transporting it. Now it can't move its feet because it is stuck to the holes in the specially designed ski, it is safe. The same way was used to transport the other animals to safety in the zoo.
ReplyDeleteThis giant elephant is water skiing because he is in a competition. He is trying his best to win the long hard race. All his friends watching the competition. Water skiing is the elephants favourite sport. Since he was young he was training, so hopefully one day he will become world champion.
ReplyDeleteI think maybe the gigant elephant was lost so it try to find his friend because the elephant was racing with his friend but he don't know which way to go so he try to find his friend then he saw his friend was crosing the river so he ski's on the river then he find his friend so he go black to race.
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Jordan the elephant heard the trumpet of a group of elephants on nearby island. He really likes to go but he didn’t know how to get there. So he asked the boat to drive him to the island they made water skis and they set off to the nearby island. What a beautiful sight to see a gigantic elephant skiing elegantly. I couldn’t believe my eyes I never knew that an elephant can do water skiing. By Joshua Elamparithi
ReplyDeleteThe elephant was floating to the village's in India unusually on a pair of ski's while a boat was pulling the elephant on ski's. The elephant must have felt uncomfortable with his bear feet connected to a pair of ski's his leg's must have hurt for hours and how hot would it be while going past New Delhi and ending up in Baghdad.
ReplyDeleteAs the northen jungles of Africa was at risk, no wild animal would like to stay there, but one elephant was brave enough to risc it's life for his family. He tried hard to stop the hunters from cutting down the trees and killing othor animals, at his 4th try he managed to stop 6 hunters and made them realise how important the jungle is to people, but most of the hunters had already taken over the place and most animals had to be taken all the way to the eastern jungles of India ,and that included the elephant but all the animals that were still living were very gratefull for the bravery for him.
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Ela the enormous elephant was upset and disappointed because she had to leave her habitat ,she was very enormous that more than 200 people would be needed to carry her. The hunters came and they told her that she will have to get killed if she doesn't go with them. Ela didn't know where she was going so she kept quite.They had to go on a boat but Ela couldn't fit so the hunters made an enormous pair of skis and Ela started to ski on the icy and freezing water.When they reached the other side of the river there were some APUWs (animal protection union workers), they punished the hunters and took away all their weapons and the APUWs (animal protection union workers) sent Ela back to her own habitat.
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