Thursday, 20 March 2014

20.03.14 English homework

A Letter of Complaint

Imagine that you’ve been feeling poorly and have taken some medicine to help you get better. Imagine that instead of making you better (doing what it said on the bottle) the medicine has actually done something unexpected to you. Perhaps the medicine has made you bigger or smaller. Maybe the medicine has changed you into something else, do you now have super powers?

What you have to do is write a letter of complaint to the people who made the medicine. Make sure that you tell them what has happened to you. Tell them what things you now find difficult because of the effects of the medicine (you could also mention anything that you find easier!). Tell them exactly what you want them to do about the situation and why.


Remember to set out your letter correctly!

21 comments:

  1. I will tell my mummy if she will get me some proper medicine to help me to get me better then I will go to school .

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  2. Fariha Chowdhury21 March 2014 at 18:01

    Can I please do the homework you put on the blog?


    FARIHA CHOWDHURY

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  3. Dear, Manager of Boots Pharmacy,

    On Thursday 20th March 2014, I bought a medicine to help my cold to go away at Barkingside Boots and I drank just a bit of it and bang, suddenly wings grew on me and I started to fly like bird. I don't know what happened but I am sure it's because I drank the medicine from your shop. I am very unhappy, the medicine is meant to take my cold away, not give me wings! My wings still have not disappeared. Now what I want you to do, is find a medicine that could get rid of these wings because humans should not have wings. I will also be taking this case to court, which will probably result in you paying a lot of money. When you want me to collect the medicine call:02012345678.
    Yours Sincerely,
    Sophieya Thirugnanasampanthan.

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  4. Dear Doctor X,

    I am very disappointed with the medicine you gave me, it was meant to be for hay fever. First I took the liquid which gave me a headache, then I ordered the tablets, the colour of the tablets were yellow with black stripes. On the back of the packet it said take two a day with half a glass of water and every day I did that and I felt weirder and weirder.

    Then when I took it once more you wouldn’t believe it , your medicine accidently gave me wolverines DNA . I started growing wolverine claws and I couldn’t walk properly. I am still walking like a gorilla please find a cure that will help me.

    Your sincerely

    MIKAEL STEWART

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  5. My Letter Of Complaint

    Dear Doctor
    I have shrunk because of the medicine you gave me. I find it hard to get snacks and use the toilet, make tea, play with toys read a book and play on my wii, ipad, DS and my phone. But there are some things I find easier like watching T.V. because it feels like I'm watching a 100 screen T.V., having a bath because I can do it in the sink and I can drive in my toy cars. I wish I was back to normal though. To solve this I would like you to make a medicine that would change me back to normal!

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  6. My Letter Of Complaint
    Dear Doctor,
    I have the medicine you gave me but it has mysteriously shrunken me. I find it difficult to read a book, get a snack but I can eat some, do my homework, play on the wii, play on the DS, play on the iPad and my phone. But I do find some things easier like watching TV because it feels like I'm watching a 100 screen TV, playing hide and seek because I can hide anywhere, I can drive a toy car, and I can take a bath in a sink. I wish I was back to normal though. To solve this I solve this I would like you to invent a medicine that will change me back to normal.

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  7. Dear, Doctor

    I am complaining about the vitamin medicine you gave to me. On Saturday, I picked up my medicine and the lady at the pharmacy said I have to have three spoons a day, one in the morning, one at lunch, and one before I go to bed. In the morning as I had the vitamin medicine I started to have a tingly sensation in my tummy. I thought that it was normal so I carried on taking the medicine three times a day. The next day I woke up at 7:30am, as I went to get up I banged my head on the celling. I was a giant the medicine made me so so tall that my head went through the old crooked roof I was stuck !!!

    Next time don’t forget to test the medicine before you give it to anyone.

    Your, sincerely
    Amrit.

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  8. Dear sir,
    I am writing to you to complain about the medicine you have given me to treat my illness. Since taking the medicine my hands and feet have been growing at a fast rate. This means none of my shoes fit me any more and I am having to buy new shoes. As my hands are now twice their normal size I am can not tie my shoe laces or do up my buttons but I can do up my fleece zip. I want you to pay the money for the shoes and I want my money back that I paid for the medicine. The only benefit I have had is that I have taken up boxing because my fists are twice as big as the other peoples.
    Many thanks
    Billy Lewthwaite



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  9. Narenkarthic Nagarajan23 March 2014 at 16:47

    Dear Dr Joseph,

    I am writing to you because of the medicine you gave me. It has made me massive! There is a massive hole in my roof and everyone is scared me. This is a nightmare. I want to make me the right size with a solution. No medicine I just want a mystical or General solution. I don't want medicine because it might do something even worse! I'm so stressed being big. I just want to be normal! Please help me become normal again. This is making me hurt myself and I cant even eat my breakfast or dinner. I am begging you to make me smaller, PLEASE!

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  10. Jacob Elsdon
    75, Brocket Way
    Chigwell
    IG7 4ER
    23/3/14
    Dear Mrs.Wonka,
    I am writing to complain about your product even though you’re the best medicine business. Has there been a mistake with your factory, Wonkas marvellous medicine? Whenever I talk or write, my words turn into Lithuanian, you’re lucky I am writing normally at the minute.
    Because I keep speaking Lithuanian, people can’t understand when I write raidės, and I could not read my pirkinių sąrašą when I went shopping! This is simply žiaurios! However I even think my katė is starting to understand me which can be a bit strange. Please tell me this all one big košmaras.
    I would like you to find an anti- dote right away before I end up like Doctor Doolittle. You better come up with a plan soon otherwise were both going to be in teismas next week. I would like to pick up the secret receptas by the end of the savaitę.

    Jūsų nuoširdžiai ,

    Jokūbas Elsdon (Sorry about that!)


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  11. 4H homework
    Medicine complaint
    To Dr. Hutton

    The medicine you gave me last week on Monday 9:30 AM, did not make me feel better instead I shrunk to the size of a pea. I had to jump on each key on the keyboard one at a time to write this complaint and did you know it took me 2 hours!

    Now that I am small I am finding it hard to go the toilet, go upstairs and come down again but I can squeeze through small gaps and have gigantic, mysterious, exiting fun adventures. Did you know I have already explored 22 tiny gaps in my house? So you see that I am having a few problems which are important that’s why I need you to give me a medicine that will make me better and make me grow back to my normal size.

    Thank you

    Yours sincerely
    Rida Nazeer

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  12. Dear Pharmacy,

    Today I was trying your honey flavoured medicine and then I stared flying in the air. The good thing about this is I can fly to the school to and not have to walk. The bad thing is my friends are laughing at me and say" I am look like a bee". I would like you to give new medicine for this.

    By Kusenthini.

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  13. Dear Medicine Company

    I am writing to you because your mind blowing medicine had cursed me to dance forever,and I am starting to panic because I can't manage any simply task such as eating, drinking, sleeping and more!!!!

    If you don't believe then go to every hospital in the UK. If you are wondering why you need to visit every hospital in the UK, then here is the reason:
    Because your fantastic medicine had cursed me to dance forever,I have visited almost every hospital in the UK.I might of missed some out because they were CLOSED. And NON of them helped me and this silly curse.so when I came home from all those hospitals, I decided to write a letter to this medicine company and I thought that maybe they will take it seriously and make a cure.

    Now that you know my horrible situation, I hope that you will take my message and make a cure.If you don't make a cure in 2 days you will have to PAY me £100.

    Your sincerely Elina.

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  14. 80 Gesham Road
    Romford, JKL 4JL
    24.03.2014
    ABC Pharmaceutical Plc
    London, SE1 0JM

    Dear Mr.Smith,

    I am Avi Khurana. I am writing to you to complain about the unexpected side effects of Mitomycin (your antipyretic medicine).

    Last week I was poorly, so I took your medicine hoping that I would soon get better; but, strange things began to happen! As the first drop entered my mouth, my head started to grow smaller! Soon, it was as small as a walnut! I was flabbergasted! The next day, it was back to normal, but then my hair started changing colour every hour! Even as I am wring to you, my hair is turning form bright pink to red.

    So I want you to withdraw this medication from the market and publish a news report about its side effects. I would also like you to pay for my treatment.

    Please reply as quickly as possible.

    Warm regards

    Avi Khurana

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  15. Dear Pharmacy,


    Today I was trying your honey flavoured medicine and then I stared flying in the air. the good thing about this is I can fly to the school to and not have to walk. the bad thing is my friend are laugh at me and say" I am look like a bee". I would like you to give new medicine for this.

    By Kusenthini

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  16. Dear Pharmacy,


    Today I was trying your honey flavoured medicine and then I stared flying in the air. the good thing about this is I can fly to the school to and not have to walk. the bad thing is my friend are laugh at me and say" I am look like a bee". I would like you to give new medicine for this.

    By Kusenthini

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  17. Dear Calpol makers
    I am writing to you because your sugar-free medicine has made me have super powers like super man. I got super strength but there is a problem. Though I can lift anything heavy like a sofa or a large rock, people are scared of me that I am going might hurt them. The good thing is that I can be part of a famous T.V show named the strongest man and I can be rich. But I want to be my old self again. Please can you make another medicne that reverses the changes so the effect wears off. URGENT.

    Yours sincerely
    Joshua

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  18. FAYE HARPER!!!!!!!24 March 2014 at 19:49

    Dear Sir/Madam

    I am writing to you for a letter of complaint about the medicine I have purchased from you. The medicine said it will help me with my cough and sore throat but, instead of this it has done the complete opposite and made it worse.

    Now, the most important thing that has happened to me, I can talk to animals. Not only can I talk to animals I am wanted to scientists because I am a new kind of species. This has affected my day to day life because I am afraid to go outside because people always staire at me.

    I hope this has brought your attention to this troubling medicine.
    May you please help me with my severe situation.

    Yours Sincerely,
    Faye Harper

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  19. Miss Victoria R Zlatkovsky
    455 New North Road
    Ilford
    Essex

    Dear sir/madam,

    I would like to submit a complaint about your medication.

    Two days ago, I brought a medicine for hayfever. I read everything on the label, and everything looked normal.

    I have to say, and thank you, it tasted incredibly nice and it helped me a lot with my terrible hayfever!

    But, when I drank one full tea spoon, my arms started to shrink! The next day I was shivering, I drank another tea spoon and my head had started to shrink rapidly, I barely even noticed it! I was so confused.

    Since the side effects were so defective and compared to the good effects, therefore you must stop making that medicine!

    Now my body needs surgery to get back to normal.This will cost me a lot of money. It will cost me millions of pounds to do that surgery!

    Your sincerely,

    Victoria Zlatkovsky

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  20. Dear Hospital

    I am writing to you so that i can tell you about your bad medican that you gave me to have, had done something bad to me.
    Your medicen made me very fat and silly.I am bigger then my house and i even cant go to school
    to learn.So can you please send me another medicen ,if not i will call the police or come to you to see what you have done with me........................................................

    From Teodor Pestisor

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  21. Dear doctor,

    I have drank the medicine you gave me but I feel very unusual . I'm getting super powers instead of a cure , like 'super fast' ' green slime' and lots of other features/powers but I'm only mentioning these 2 because these are the harsh powers and non stop powers. Super fast is non stop but when I want to stop it, it will never stop. Green slime is yucky, when ever its see's a person it will cover them in green slime and I always get the blame but luckily the green slime will cover them and so they go off. But I don't want that to happen I want to always be friendly ( I am but not with the powers). Which medicine are you giving me? And I want you to sort it out.
    If anything like this happens AGAIN, you will lose your customers.

    Sincerely Miss Ivana Thomson

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