Thursday, 8 May 2014

08.05.14 English Homework

Hi year 4. 
We really need your help. Miss Hutton, Miss Garlick and I have been writing a letter to Mrs Dye about our school trip to London zoo. We need you to check it for us. Can you check that our spelling, punctuation and grammar are correct? Can you check for errors and re-write it below with the corrections.
Thank you Year 4 teachers.

Dear mrs dye
Year 4 would like your permission to go to london zoo on tuesday 20th may 2014 we will be traveling by train from hainault staton and we will walked through regents park to the zoo
we will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spnd time looking around the zoo.
we hop to arrived back at school at 4.30am.
The children will realy enjoy the day adn it will help learn about our topic home sweet home.
Thankyou

Miss hutton, miss Henderson and miss garlick
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25 comments:

  1. Amrit Nandra8 May 2014 at 16:38

    Dear Mrs Dye
    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo, on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be traveling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through Regents Park to the Zoo.
    We will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spend time looking around the Zoo.
    We hope to arrived back at school at 4.30pm.
    The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic home sweet home.
    Thank you

    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick.

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  2. Anonymous8 May 2014 at 19:01

    Dear Mrs Dye
    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London zoo on Tuesday 20th may 2014. We will be traveling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through Regents park to the zoo.
    we will eat our lunch at 12:00 and then spend time looking around the zoo.
    we hope to arrive back at school at 4:30 am.
    The children will really enjoy the day and it will help us learn about our topic ''Home Sweet Home.''
    Thank you

    Miss Hutton,Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick
    By Rida

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  3. Naren8 May 2014 at 20:08

    Dear Mrs Dye,

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be travelling by train from Hainault Station and we will walk through Regents Park to the Zoo.
    We will eat lunch at 12:00 and then spend time looking around the Zoo.
    We will hop back on the train and arrive at school at 4:30pm.
    The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic Home sweet home
    Thank you

    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick

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  4. Simran Taak9 May 2014 at 09:17

    Dear Mrs Dye
    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo, on Tuesday 20th May 2014.We will be traveling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through Regents Park to the Zoo.
    We will eat lunch at 12:00 and then spend time looking around the Zoo.
    We hope to arrived back at school at 4:30pm.
    The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic home sweet home.
    Thank you.

    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick

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  5. libbyh9 May 2014 at 10:04

    Dear Mrs. Dye,

    Year 4 would like your permission to go London zoo.On Tuesday 20th may 2014 we will be traveling by a train from Hainault station, and we will walked through regents Park to the zoo.
    We will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spend time looking around the zoo .We hope to arrived back at 4.30pm.
    the children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic home sweet home.

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  6. Anonymous9 May 2014 at 10:50

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to london zoo on tuesday 20th may 2014 we will be traveling by train from hainault staton and we will walked through regents park to the zoo
    we will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spnd time looking around the zoo.
    we hop to arrived back at school at 4.30am.
    The children will realy enjoy the day adn it will help learn about our topic home sweet home.
    Thankyou

    Miss hutton, miss Henderson and miss garlick matthew

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  7. Elina Bistere9 May 2014 at 17:27

    Dear, Mrs Dye

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be traveling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through Regents Park to the Zoo.We will eat lunch at 12:00AM and then we will spend time looking around the Zoo.We hope to arrive back to school at 4:30PM. The children will really enjoy the day, and it will help them learn about our topic Home Sweet Home.
    Thank you

    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick.

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  8. Amrit Nandra9 May 2014 at 17:47

    Have a good weekend!!!!

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  9. joshua10 May 2014 at 13:11

    Dear Mrs Dye

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be travelling by train from Hainult Station and we will walk through Regents Park to the zoo.
    We will eat our lunch 12:00PM, and then spend time looking around the zoo. We hope to arrive back to school at 4:30PM. The children will really enjoy the day and it will help them learn about our topic Home Sweet Home.
    Thank you.

    Miss Henderson, Miss Hutton and Miss Garlick.

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  10. Anonymous10 May 2014 at 19:25

    Dear, Miss Dye

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014.We will be travelling by train from Hainault station, and we will walk through Regents Park to the Zoo. We will eat lunch at 12:00 and then spend time looking around the Zoo.We hope will enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic'Home sweet Home'
    Thank you Yours Faithfully
    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson, and Miss Garlic
    By Sophieya Y4H

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  11. LILLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!10 May 2014 at 21:27

    Dear, Mrs Dye

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th may 2014.We will be traveling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through Regents Park to the zoo. We will eat lunch at 12:00 and then we will spend time looking around the Zoo. We hope to arrive back to school at 4:30PM. The children will really enjoy the day, and
    it will help them learn
    about our topic Home Sweet Home .

    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick

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  12. Anonymous10 May 2014 at 21:51

    Dear Mrs. Dye,

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be travelling by train from Hainault Station and we will walk through Regents Park to the Zoo. We will eat lunch at 12:00pm and then spend time looking around the Zoo. We will hop back on the train and arrive at school at 4:30pm. The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic Home sweet home.

    Thank you

    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick
    By Hassan 4h

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  13. Ivana11 May 2014 at 10:07

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to the London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be travelling by train Hainault station and we will walk through Regents Park to the Zoo. We will eat lunch at 12:00PM and then we will spend time looking around the Zoo. We hope to arrive back at school at 4:30PM. The children will really enjoy the day, and it will help them learn about our topic "Home Sweet Home"
    Thank you

    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick

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  14. Anonymous11 May 2014 at 11:35

    Dear Mrs Dye
    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo, on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be travelling by train , from Hainault station, and we will walk though Regents Park to the Zoo. We will eat lunch at 12:00, and then spend looking around the Zoo. We hope to arrive back to school at 4:30 pm. The children will really enjoy the day, and it will help them learn about our topic 'Home sweet home'.
    Thank you.
    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson, Miss Garlick.
    By Vicky Zlatkovsky, 4H.

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  15. Anonymous11 May 2014 at 12:44



    Dear Mrs Dye

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be travelling by train from Hainault Station and we will walk through Regents Park to the Zoo.
    We will eat lunch at 12.00PM and then spend time looking around the Zoo.
    We hope to arrive back at school at 4:30PM.
    The children will really enjoy the day and it will help them learn about our topic Home Sweet Home.

    Thankyou


    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick

    by Billy

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  16. Teo 4H11 May 2014 at 12:49

    Dear Mrs Dye,
    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014.We will be travelling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through Regents Park to the Zoo.We will eat lunch at 12:00pm and then spend time looking around the Zoo.We will hop back on the train and arrive at School at 4:30pm.The children will really enjoy the day and it will help them learn about our topic, Home sweet home.

    Thank you

    Miss Hutton,Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick

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  17. Anonymous11 May 2014 at 18:10

    Dear Mrs Dye

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be travelling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through Regents park to the zoo. We will eat lunch at 12.00 noon and then spend time looking around the zoo. We hope to arrive back at school at 4.30 pm. The children will really enjoy the day and it will help them learn about our topic Home Sweet Home.

    Thank you

    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick.

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  18. FAYE !!!!!!!!11 May 2014 at 20:01

    Dear mrs dye

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London zoo on tuesday 20th may 2014 ,we will be traveling by train from hainault station and we will walk through regents park to the zoo we will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spend time looking around the zoo, we hope to arrive back at school at 4.30pm. The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic home sweet home.
    Thank you
    Miss hutton Miss henderson and Miss garlick
    By faye

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  19. Reece Marshall11 May 2014 at 20:12

    Dear Mrs Dye,
    Year4 would like to kindly ask for your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014
    We will be travelling by train safely from Hainaut station and we will walk through Regents Park to get to the zoo.we will eat lunch at 12:00pm and the we will spend time and look around the zoo.We hope to return at 16:30pm.The kids will enjoy it and it will help them learn about our project 'Home Sweet Home'.

    Sincerely Miss Hutton, Miss Garlic and Miss Henderson.

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  20. Jacob Elsdon11 May 2014 at 21:44

    Hello Mrs.Hutton and class, I will be coming back soon. I hope I can come on the trip.

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    1. John Bramston Primary 13 May 2014 at 21:58

      Of course Jacob.

      We are missing you in school

      Miss Hutton

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  21. Mikael Stewart11 May 2014 at 21:56

    Dear Mrs Dye

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be traveling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through Regents park to the Zoo. We will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spend time looking around the Zoo. We hope to arrive back at school at 4.30pm the children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic home sweet home.

    Thank you.

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  22. Igne Karaliute11 May 2014 at 22:17

    Dear Mrs Dye,
    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London zoo,on tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be traveling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through Regents park to the zoo.
    We will eat lunch at 12:00 and then spend time looking around the zoo. We hope to arrive back at school at 4:30 pm.
    The children will really enjoy the day and it will help to learn about our topic " Home sweet home ".
    Thank you
    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson and Miss Garlic

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  23. Anonymous12 May 2014 at 18:13

    Dear Mrs Dye

    Year 4 would like you permission to go to London zoo , on Tuesday 20th may 2014. We will be travelling by train from Hainault station and we will though regents park to the zoo. we will eat lunch at 12.00 and spend the time looking aground the zoo. We hope to arrived back at school at 4.30 pm. the children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic home sweet home.

    Thank you

    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick.

    By Kusenthini

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  24. avi k12 May 2014 at 21:15

    Dear Mrs Dye

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday, 20th May 2014 .We will be traveling by train from Hainault Station and we will walk through Regents Park to the zoo.
    We will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spend time looking around the zoo.
    We hope to arrive back at school at 4:30 pm.
    The children will really enjoy the day and it will help them learn about our topic "Home Sweet Home".

    Thank you

    Miss Hutton, Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick

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