The 100 word challenge
What is the 100 word challenge?
A prompt is given, which can be a picture or a series of individual words and the children can use up to 100 words to write a creative piece. The word count is to encourage you to really think about which words you are using and be super creative with your choices.
Give it your best effort because your friends will be marking your homework and our quad blogging friends from around the world will also be reading and commenting on our pieces of writing. Good luck!
This is your prompt...
…suddenly the pain in my arm…
An example of using this in your writing is below:
Dearest Abigail… I wrote in silence, the only noises joining me were the airy gusts of wind seeping through my tiny window. I ignored, eager to finish this unfulfilling letter. Suddenly the pain in my arm went from lightly aching to extreme shock and agonising torment. “I think I should take a well deserved rest…” I said aloud, whilst scrunching up the paper and tossing it with the others.
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I got faster and faster. I was riding down a humongous hill suddenly I was flying through the air. I had hit a rut and lost my balance and was falling off my bike. My dad came over to me and said” Are you ok?” Suddenly the pain in my arm hurt so much. My hands, arm and fingers were bleeding and so painful it was like being hit by a car. I replied “No I am really hurt” I did not ride down that hill but when I got to the bottom I carried on riding my bike again
ReplyDeleteBilly Lewthwaite
real story billy I like the way you set it out it is good as it is do not change anything
DeleteLibby
Welldone billy
DeleteI like the word humongous
Deleteneed more descriptive words
Deleteby Avi 'n' Josh
billy I know you done it after church parade at cubs
Deleteyou wrote 100 words
Well done Billy!!
By Fariha and mikael
Elina I like the names Rosie and Daisy
DeleteOne day a little girl with blond hair, pale skin and red lips called Rosie had gymnastics club after school with her friend called Daisy. After their gymnastics club they always go to the park with their family's. Next week when Rosie and Daisy had gymnastics club Rosy done a handstand Rosie fell down hard and hurt herself Rosy told her teacher that suddenly the pain in my arm is very bad. Rosie’s teacher called Rosie’s parents and the hospital, Rosie’s parents and the hospital came as fast as they could. Daisy was very sad that her friend got injured.
ReplyDeleteElian good work but you can improve the sentence I go to the park but apart from that I like it
Deletebilly and Libby
Very good description elina you described Rosie.
DeleteRemember to spell Rosie in one spelling.
Amrit
good describe of characters
Deletegood scene
by Joshua 'n' Avi
In a flash, I opened my eyes and what did I see? I saw doctors, nurses and people who were injured. "Where am I?" I asked myself. "You are in hospital." said a voice."I am a doctor and I am talking to you." said a voice. When I saw her clearly, she was horrible! She tricked me by saying that I am in hospital and the voice was the wicked witch. Suddenly the pain of my arm stopped and a gigantic storm appeared and took me back home safely. I was happy because I was going back home!!!
ReplyDeleteBy Fariha (Y3CH)
you can improve the word said you could put replied, cried
Deletebilly and libby
good characters
Deleteby josh and avi
I like it how you have described your arm stopped and there was a storm. Good Work! Fariha well done!
DeleteI was in the park playing with my friend Elina. We were on the merry-go-round when I came flying off. I screamed “Ahhhh…” suddenly the pain in my arm was shocking. My arm was swollen like a balloon waiting to be burst. The pain was getting worst, it was like a bomb exploding.
ReplyDeleteElina shouted out to my mum who was sitting on the bench reading. My mum came running as fast as a cheetah. She called the ambulance....
By the time the ambulance came the weather had changed, there was lightning which was like glass shattering in the sky.
Amrit Nandra
I really enjoyed your story it was very interesting.
DeleteMaybe you need some more character's.
Elina
Maybe put a twist and more because you said at the end "there was lightning which was like glass shattering in the sky" maybe you should add more like what happened in the hospital? We really enjoyed it but maybe make us keep enjoying it.
Deletemaybe describe chraters
Deletewe enjoyed descriptive words
by josh and avi
it was amazing we like the settings a lot but you could keep the reader guessing were it happened. once again the it was perfect all the spellings are correct and we all love it.
Deleteby indie and shreya
I forgot to say that you need to write how the character's look.
DeleteI like it amirt but you should of not but spaces between the sentences
Deletebilly and Libby
Not once, not twice, but thrice, it happened to me! It first happened when I only three. The first time was when I jumped off the couch. The second time was when I jumped off the second step of the bottom of the staircase. I used to pretend that I was a super hero! My big sister used to egg me on to try ‘jump off dares.’
ReplyDeleteThe third time my sister dared me to jump off the temple stage. I jumped off the stage. Suddenly the pain in my arm shook me!
I don’t like superheroes anymore!
try to use more speech
Deletegood descriptive words
BY JOSHUA
ok good work avi
Deleteok GOOD WORK AVI
DeleteLove your poem
DeleteI went to the shops to bye a banana, and then i had a bad pain in my arm. I could not hear anythink and when i woke up i was in a hospital. The last thing i could remeber was going to the shops, what is going to happen to me? When i thought about it, apart from going to the shops all i could remember was my name. The doctors came in and said that i would be ok, but it would take time for me to remember other things that had happened to me. But this SCARED ME
ReplyDelete100 words
faye it was very intreasting wrong spelling for buy
Deletefantastic work! try use more adjective's and descriptive words
Deleteby auria,kusenthini
goood
Deleteyou should put big letters but not too big or it is hard to spell
Deleteby naren
I layed down on a bed.Suddenly the pain in my arm increased because the nurse put a sharp needle .I burst out crying then everyone did, my mum, my dad and my sister.My mum hugged me as tight as she could,I hugged back.I was hurt so badly.I wish it didn't happen to me.I was the most sadest moment of my life.After I had a good night sleep I became much calmer . I woke up and there were no problems in my arm. The injection certainly worked,I am finally better.
ReplyDeleteBy Sophieya
Faye you have to use small letres
ReplyDeletethere is nothink I could say about you work GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteCalm down Faye but yes use some small letters.
DeleteI LOVED YOUR POEM AMRIT!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI go to play football on saturday morning,when i have my match,my couch Sam he tell me to go in goal,everybody in my team started amazed because they hadn`t experience.Keeper so extraordinarly beautiful.we start the game and in ten minute one of my frends shout the ball in my arm.Suddenly the pain in my arm she start to make me fell so bad,my couch stop the game and give me first aid but its dosent he let me.So i go to the hospital and the doctors make injections,,after a couple hours and now im feel bether.
ReplyDeleteBy Teo 3CH
My younger brother's name is Rohan. He is five years old.He is so cute. I love him so much. He reads in class reciption at Downshall primary school.Always we play & watch tv in together.On saturday we were playing football in the garden, suddenly I fall down and I had a bad pain in my arm. My mom came over to me and said” Are you ok?” Suddenly the pain in my arm hurt so much. It was so painful. My brother was crying because he feels guilty. I said him "Rohan, don't cry". But he didn't stop crying. I looked at him and I forgot my pain .My mum hugged me and she brought me in the hospital.The doctors made injections. The injection certainly worked,I am finally better.My brother hugged me and told me "I love you so much".
ReplyDeleteMe and my friden playing hide and seek in the park i am so happy i am coming to park beause i like playing with my friden in the park then we climb up the three suddenly i fell down in the floor and is so plain in my arm i was crying beause is so heard then my mum said "dont cry like a baby and dont climb up the three beause then you fell down "then i am not climb up the three just i play hide and seek then i was so happy and my friden happy to but the plain that went through my arm was to much to handle.
ReplyDeleteby kusenthini.
Playing in the huge football field using cool stunts not once but three times but the fourth time I fell on my arm and suddenly it started to pain a lot I felt as if it had been broken.I told my mom that it pained a lot so my mom took me to the hospital. The doctor checked my arm and he said it was a fracture and I need an x-ray the x-ray showed that my wrist is broken.The doctor decided for an operation so they unconscious me and did my operation.when I regained conscious I felt a lot better.
ReplyDeleteI woke up in the morning, it was bright day. I rushed downstairs and asked my mum could we go to the park. 20 minutes after I already swag on the swings. When I jumped accidentally I twisted my arm. It felt like sharp knife cutting my arm. I was in terrible pain. We rushed to the hospital. We spent 2 hours in emergency. The doctor decided to give me an injection. It looks like big sharp spike going through my skin. And after they sent me to do the x-ray. The photo showed that my bone split in two pieces. They put arm into the plaster, I felt much better...
ReplyDeleteBy Igne
On a nice sunny day I went to the beach for a swim. I saw a pirate ship with nobody on deck.I swam to it and climbed up the ladder.Suddenly I felt pain in my arm and realized someone got hold of my arm and pushed me into the lower deck and shouted “stay there”. When I wandered around I saw a cabin named “Captain Jack”. When I opened it, I saw a mountain of gold and diamonds and fell asleep on top of them. When I woke up I realised I was in my bed and heard my mum calling “wake up Joshua”.
ReplyDeleteBy Joshua E
I woke up in the morning, it was bright day. I rushed downstairs and asked my mum could we go to the park. 20 minutes after I already swag on the swings. When I jumped accidentally I twisted my arm. It felt like sharp knife cutting my arm. I was in terrible pain. We rushed to the hospital. We spent 2 hours in emergency. The doctor decided to give me an injection. It looks like big sharp spike going through my skin. And after they sent me to do the x-ray. The photo showed that my bone split in two pieces. They put arm into the plaster, I felt much better...
ReplyDeleteBy Igne
Me and my friend anna found two sphere shaped rocks,so we put our surf boards on them and started balancing,I was doing quite well but anna kept falling of but soon she got the hang of it.when we thought it was easy we moved on another huge step ahead,we splashed into the sea.we used our balancing skills to stand up on our boards an start to surf!!! 72 suddenly another boy pushed me of on some rocks,I had pain in my arm I had to go to hospatle but soon I felt so much better.
ReplyDeleteBy Shreya
"BANG” The sound of the two shot guns hit the police man and they were knocked unconscious. The criminal shot again, this time a centimetre away from knocking me straight across the head. I rushed right into a dead end. The black hooded criminal was wearing an unusual cowboy hat. The only way I could survive was jumping across to the next building. “Jump" I thought. So I jumped and a gunshot hit and attacked my arm. I was falling off the building, I could feel the hurtful pain in my arm and the ambulance came to my rescue.
ReplyDeleteSuddenly, there was a green flash running back and forward. It was confusing. One of the men got caught by him. just in a second it caught me as well and in a flash there was some magic throwing me up in the air, i landed on the tower's head but it wasn't what i was scared of it was the magic called...
ReplyDeleteit was hard to write only 100 words I found out nealy every day we write over 100 words !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletebut did you read everyone's books
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